I wrote this poem for a Poetry Contest. I'm very happy to say that I didn't win any prize!! The irony is I neither know English nor know anything about Poem. But I took a plunge because destiny played its part. I used all the five senses in the poem, but some sense unknown to me is really missing. Of the several reasons I didn't win a prize, one of the reason is.........read the poem, I'll talk about the reason later..
I remember your first sight
When our eyes met on a cloudy night.
I remember your first call
That made my ears ping pong ball.
I remember your first smell
When you took my shoulder to dwell.
I remember your first kiss
That I savored like eternal bliss.
I remember your first touch
When I melted overmuch.
Three years ago
You came in like a glow.
The joy you brought
Will remain in my thought.
Today, as she held you in her arms
I felt the sweat in my palms.
Today, as she ambled with you
I felt my heart fall through.
Today, as you fade from my eyes
I succumbed to my cries.
When you reach your class
Will you tell that lass
"That's my Mother
I love her for ever"!!!
The reason is prose or poem, humor takes backstage. I have to quit fooling around to write a poem or I can keep fooling around and don't write a poem. I like the second option better!!!
THE OTHER WOMAN
I remember your first sight
When our eyes met on a cloudy night.
I remember your first call
That made my ears ping pong ball.
I remember your first smell
When you took my shoulder to dwell.
I remember your first kiss
That I savored like eternal bliss.
I remember your first touch
When I melted overmuch.
Three years ago
You came in like a glow.
The joy you brought
Will remain in my thought.
Today, as she held you in her arms
I felt the sweat in my palms.
Today, as she ambled with you
I felt my heart fall through.
Today, as you fade from my eyes
I succumbed to my cries.
When you reach your class
Will you tell that lass
"That's my Mother
I love her for ever"!!!
The reason is prose or poem, humor takes backstage. I have to quit fooling around to write a poem or I can keep fooling around and don't write a poem. I like the second option better!!!
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